tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post8922002591519583718..comments2023-11-05T04:11:06.919-05:00Comments on Grey Places: Last Line Blogfest!!!Artemis Greyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10849091563671031929noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-65412253991337147512010-05-02T13:39:16.314-04:002010-05-02T13:39:16.314-04:00What a sassy girl! This is going to be quite an i...What a sassy girl! This is going to be quite an interesting story. Good work.<br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-2391449379865900702010-05-02T00:52:44.664-04:002010-05-02T00:52:44.664-04:00i love Beauty and the Beast stories. this one has ...i love Beauty and the Beast stories. this one has me intrigued.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-74071745437290467762010-05-02T00:19:34.189-04:002010-05-02T00:19:34.189-04:00Beauty sounds like a very tough chick. Nice last l...Beauty sounds like a very tough chick. Nice last line there, she seems like a survivor, not just something pretty to look at. Great job.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-90750428936292136872010-05-02T00:14:36.222-04:002010-05-02T00:14:36.222-04:00Great entry, and thank you so much for participati...Great entry, and thank you so much for participating!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-38210909154291036782010-05-01T22:08:22.064-04:002010-05-01T22:08:22.064-04:00The voice is charming and unique, and it is the re...The voice is charming and unique, and it is the retelling of a classic - how could I fail to love it? Well done!VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-38084143191407208152010-05-01T21:20:20.685-04:002010-05-01T21:20:20.685-04:00Beauty & the Beast Buds!
I love how different...Beauty & the Beast Buds!<br /><br />I love how different the two obviously are, like you said. I would love to see the two standing together; see how they grow so differently from the same roots.<br /><br />Well done. Lovely.Hanna C. Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03881224275689807056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-86042253604907848262010-05-01T20:33:01.381-04:002010-05-01T20:33:01.381-04:00I love the imagery and voice of this - great end t...I love the imagery and voice of this - great end to a first chapter. I'm so glad you joined the fun. :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-53545212545698082262010-05-01T19:16:59.983-04:002010-05-01T19:16:59.983-04:00Thanks for the comments!
Roland, I went back an...Thanks for the comments! <br /><br />Roland, I went back and fuggled with my post. This is how it's originally written, as several smaller paragraphs like you suggested. I could NOT get it to post correctly earlier. So to avoid damaging the computer (technology vexes my soul so when it doesn't respond to my wants) I posted it as it was and went out and played in the dirt. Now that I'm calmer, I was able to get the post to show up as separate paragraphs, although I still failed to get them to indent...Artemis Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849091563671031929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-89598759210769576592010-05-01T18:25:05.225-04:002010-05-01T18:25:05.225-04:00Ooh - sounds exciting! You have a great voice and ...Ooh - sounds exciting! You have a great voice and beautiful language.Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8114658220599872354.post-51246236661594329012010-05-01T17:25:57.827-04:002010-05-01T17:25:57.827-04:00I truly was captivated by your writing. I would ha...I truly was captivated by your writing. I would have only one suggestion. To make your words easier on the eye of the reader, break up your thick paragraphs into smaller, easier to digest visually ones.<br /><br />Other than that, you have done a fantastic job. Come check out my entry if you're of a mind, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.com